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Wednesday, 26 March 2014

Week 8

Writing. VCOP stands for vocabulary, connectives, openers and punctuation.

  • We are using VCOP  to help improve our writing and make it more interesting.



The stocky, moustached policeman arrived, bristling with nerves and curiosity. Today was his first day as a rookie and he did NOT want to disappoint the High Constable. Taking a long,deep breath,he pushed open the door….  (That’s VCOP!)

George Turner


The shimmering, black, cute cat scattered and scrambled along the old broken brick wall. Crash, boom, before very long the cute cat fell off the old broken brick wall. The brave cat ran away and was never to be seen again.

Rebekah Bugler

1 comment:

  1. Have enjoyed scoping your blog site, room 10. awesome water colours - thanks for allowing us to hang some in our foyer! Fabulous writing too - VCOP is a good tool for "upping" your writing quality! Keep up the good work! Mr Hewson

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